Like shaping air…

Jeri Smith-Ready is one smart cookie.

A while ago, something she said sparked an epiphany for me. She was talking about how first drafts give her trouble. She likened it to “shaping the air.”

To my mind, she’s right in that the first draft is the hardest part of the book. I had never thought about it because I’m not prone to such self-examination, but when I got to contemplating my method, I realized Jeri was spot on when she said it’s “like shaping air”. I realize she and I are probably in the minority, but we both prefer rewrites. Because the framework is already in place. When I revise, I’m just fixing what’s already there, not creating something out of nothing. That takes an incredible amount of mental energy (at least for me).

What’s your favorite part of the process?

7 Responses

  1. Susan Helene Gottfried
    August 15, 2008 at 7:33 pm | | Reply

    Rewrites, definitely. It’s when you take the blob of words you wrote to figure out where the thing ends, and then craft it into beauty.

  2. Jackie
    August 15, 2008 at 7:58 pm | | Reply

    Rewrites….I’m so much better at taking something that is already there and completely adding, subtracting, or just fixing it. As long as it’s not my work. :) For my own work (when I’m not proofing anyone elses), getting to the rewrite stage is hard because I always want to go back and start the rewrite process before I even finish the first draft.

  3. Shiloh Walker
    August 15, 2008 at 9:59 pm | | Reply

    I like that part where you’re almost on the downhill slide, not quite, but close enough that you can all but feel the wind on your face and you know exactly where you need to go.

    That, and writing the very last word of a story. Love that part. ;)

  4. azteclady
    azteclady
    August 16, 2008 at 1:34 pm | | Reply

    And she’s writing, ladies and gents! (see the nifty counter on the left hand column?)

  5. Ann
    August 17, 2008 at 5:57 pm | | Reply

    Okay, I’m willing to admit that I might be in the minority, but I think I like writing better than I do revising. I’m still liking the challenge of seeing something in my head so clearly that I can translate in onto paper.

  6. Roslyn Holcomb
    August 18, 2008 at 9:47 pm | | Reply

    Definitely the rewrites. Staring at a blank screen makes me crazy. I like to print out the previous night’s work and edit in longhand. There’s something therapeutic there, but I couldn’t say what.

  7. Devon Ellington
    August 26, 2008 at 4:26 pm | | Reply

    I love both parts of the process, for very different reasons.

    I love the passion of the first draft. Even when I outline, it’s like a new lover — everything is exciting and new.

    I love revision, because I’m honing every sentence, making it the best it can be.

    I love all of it. It’s the business end I hate, but have learned to deal with.

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